Saturday, July 18, 2015
Gunsaku Galaxy
Collected haiku
unbound by shared cause effect
is called gunsaku
no particular
first next or last verse prevails
unlike rensaku
organic grouping
each intends to stand alone
like cards in a deck
each verse a star with
intelligence of word worlds
in their own orbits
take this description
as a general guideline
meta-gunsaku
individual
three-lined verse standing alone
one haiku poem
relativity
states each stands at the center
others surround it
galactic haiku
may seem first to be written
by being on top
fill water bucket
first drops are found on bottom
final drops on top
gunsaku like stars
shining in our galaxy
sharing gravity
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