Saturday, July 18, 2015

Gunsaku Galaxy


Collected haiku

unbound by shared cause effect
is called gunsaku

no particular
first next or last verse prevails
unlike rensaku

organic grouping
each intends to stand alone
like cards in a deck

each verse a star with
intelligence of word worlds
in their own orbits

take this description
as a general guideline
meta-gunsaku

individual
three-lined verse standing alone
one haiku poem

relativity 
states each stands at the center
others surround it

galactic haiku
may seem first to be written
by being on top

fill water bucket
first drops are found on bottom
final drops on top

gunsaku like stars
shining in our galaxy
sharing gravity

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